The Voices of 810
« Metaphoer Poems! »

Welcome Guest. Please Login or Register.
Dec 26, 2009, 4:00pm

[Home] [Help] [Search] [Login] [Register]



The Voices of 810 :: Writing Samples, Examples, and Database :: Extended Metaphor Poems :: Metaphoer Poems!
   [Search This Thread][Reply] [Send Topic To Friend] [Print]
AuthorTopic: Metaphoer Poems! (Read 444 times)
chris walsh
Administrator
*****
member is offline

[avatar]


[homepage]

Joined: Oct 2003
Gender: Male
Posts: 11
Location: NEW YORK CITY
Metaphoer Poems!
« Thread Started on Dec 1, 2003, 6:27pm »		[Quote]
POst your awesome poems here!!!
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
Eleora
Guest
Re: Metaphoer Poems!
« Reply #1 on Dec 1, 2003, 7:01pm »		[Quote]
Where there was once a blanket of snow now running waters flow
as melting ice runs down a singing mountain side the hair of trees begin to grow back into green fros
now the blue eyed sky opens from her long sleep as the howls of wind turn to the wispering breez touching the upturned face of the earth .
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
CoolioKin4Galz
New Member
*
member is offline



[aim]

Joined: Oct 2003
Gender: Male
Posts: 10
Re: Metaphoer Poems!
« Reply #2 on Dec 1, 2003, 7:56pm »		[Quote]
roses are red, violets are blue (i thought violets=purple ?wierd?), the air is fresh, and so are you (i couldn't think of n e din' elze....
;D
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
Kidnerz
lil ol mEe
Full Member
***
member is offline



*phhbbb*



Joined: Oct 2003
Gender: Female
Posts: 155
Location: Brooklyn, New York
Re: Metaphoer Poems!
« Reply #3 on Dec 1, 2003, 9:33pm »		[Quote]
she's coming, she's here
it's starting to become frosty
it's starting to become chilly
it's starting to become her
with her big explosion of coldness
suddenly springs on you
she's cold...
wet...
brings happiness and yet it also brings joy
how coudl she bring both?
yet hte simple pleasures in her soft blanket
can get you either camouflage
or it can get you in trouble
now it's slowly melting into the dark, damp ground
it's transiting into her sister,
where flowers bloom
and love beings.
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
*LilGrlii*
SusieW
Full Member
***
member is offline



[aim]

Joined: Oct 2003
Gender: Female
Posts: 205
Re: Metaphoer Poems!
« Reply #4 on Dec 1, 2003, 9:37pm »		[Quote]
The old woman stands alone,
the older ones all killed by the monsters and some by the flames of nature
remaining only the very bottom of their bodies,
cold wind is circling the old woman
her hair changing
falling off one by one
the monsters are stomping toward her
sharp cutters in their hands
down she goes
another life ends
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
SusieW
Full Member
***
member is offline



[aim]

Joined: Oct 2003
Gender: Female
Posts: 205
Re: Metaphoer Poems!
« Reply #5 on Dec 1, 2003, 9:38pm »		[Quote]
OMG!!! mines suck, eleora's is really good, michele's is funny, and lil ol mee is really nice, (the poems i mean) :P ;D
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
Ellen
New Member
*
member is offline

[avatar]

elleN da best! x p

[aim]

Joined: Oct 2003
Gender: Female
Posts: 32
Location: wat???!!
Re: Metaphoer Poems!
« Reply #6 on Dec 1, 2003, 9:57pm »		[Quote]
There was once a river of green, which flows along every side, every curb that it meets. Until the screaming of hell covers where there was once full of peace and love. As slowly there forms a river of tears, yearning to breath free under the weight of hatred and war. Now under the cracks of waht was once a river of green. There lays a new life waiting to wake up to the rays of fire.
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
From: liL_melongrl
Rjay
Full Member
***
member is offline



yo yo yo kill the beat



Joined: Nov 2003
Gender: Male
Posts: 106
Location: 656 E223st
Re: Metaphoer Poems!
« Reply #7 on Dec 14, 2003, 8:49pm »		[Quote]
I HAVE A POEM BUT ITS TOO NASTY BUT I'LL TYPE IT ANYWAY (IT INVOLES BATHROOM STUFF)
HERE I SIT ALL BROKEN HARTED
CAME TO S**T BUT ONLY FARTED
THEN ONE DAY I TOOK A CHANCE
WENT TO FART AND S**T MY PANTS

HERE I SIT I'M A LOSS
TRYING TO S**T OUT TACO SAUCE
WHEN IT COMES I HOPE AND PRAY
I DONT BLOW MY @$$ AWAY

HERE I LIEAIN A STINKY VAPOR
BECAUSE SOME BASTARDS STOLE THE YOILET PAPER
SHALL I LIE OR SHALL I LINGER
OR SHALL I BE FORCED TO USE MY FINGER

SOME COME HERE TO SIT AND THINK
SOME COME HERE TO S**T AND STINK
BUT I CAME HERE TO SCRATCH MY B**LS
AND READ THE BULLS**T ON THE WALLS
Link to Post - Back to Top  IP: Logged
WORD LIFE!!
   [Search This Thread][Reply] [Send Topic To Friend] [Print]

Click Here To Make This Board Ad-Free


This Board Hosted For FREE By ProBoards
Get Your Own Free Message Boards & Free Forums!